9 Words to Dump from Your Resume And the Hot 9 to Include

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Think of the hundreds of resumes that cross an HR manager’s desk every week. It’s truly a mountain of paperwork they’d rather bypass. With the job market being what it is, applicants and recent grads are cranking out resumes using the same accepted industry standard formats. Nothing wrong with that. But there are subtle ways to make your resume stand out from the rest.  

 
One way is to be word wise. That means dumping the standard weak-weasel words and “amping” your resume with power words. Words that will catch a recruiter’s or HR manager’s eye.  Words that will stop a keyword scanning program and shift your resume into the “take a second look” category. But first, the words that need dumping. They include:


  1. Strong
  2. Exceptional
  3. Good
  4. Excellent
  5. Outstanding
  6. Effective
  7. Driven
  8. Motivated
  9. Seasoned


These are self-aggrandizing words that your references may use to describe you. But if you use them, it sounds like you’re patting yourself on the back. They simply lack objectivity. They’re qualitative and can’t easily be linked to quantitative appraisals of your accomplishments.

 
It’s much better to use the hot 9 words that can be connected to specific areas of your performance on the job. These will catch a recruiter’s or HR manager’s eye. They’ll also be flagged by keyword programs, giving your resume a “second read.”  They include:


  1. Reduced
  2. Improved
  3. Developed
  4. Researched
  5. Created
  6. Increased
  7. Accomplished
  8. Won
  9. Under budget


When using these keywords, try to link them with specific facts and figures. This adds credibility to the words and will draw the attention of recruiters, HR managers and most recently, applicant tracking software. 

 
It’s an unfortunate fact of life that most companies now use some type of applicant tracking software. This software looks for keywords that match specific job requirements. Some companies digitize the hundreds of resumes they receive on a daily basis, store them in a database, search for candidates using keywords, then create interview call lists. The bottom line: If your resume lacks the right combination of job-specific keywords, it will end up in digital limbo, never to be seen again until a programmer purges the file. I know, it’s brutal and impersonal, but such is the world we live in. 

 
Here are some suggestions on the types of keywords to include in your resume. They should be job, task and industry specific:

  • Job Titles
  • Product Names
  • Technical Terms
  • Industry Jargon
  • Software/Hardware Packages
  • Job-specific Buzzwords
  • Degrees or Certifications
  • University or College Names
  • Company Names
  • Service Types
  • Professional Organizations


Creating an effective resume that will get noticed these days takes a bit of work. Much more than just listing your accomplishments. If you have any suggestions, be sure to include them in the comments section.


 

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  • Carolyn Dollison
    Carolyn Dollison
    I Feel That The Information Given, Is Very Helpful In Getting A Response From a  Prospective Employer/
  • Dwight Jackson
    Dwight Jackson
    Great information,i really appreciate it ,i will definately use it.Thanks from   Dwight Jackson.
  • Linda Ordonez
    Linda Ordonez
    Well,, at least these tips can be taken in to consideration for some people. Is it jst me or many employers are becoming more annoying by posting "New Grads or No experience need not apply." So what? A this pace we are never getting a job.
  • Donise Holley
    Donise Holley
    Thanks for the information. I is very helpful.
  • Angela Ray
    Angela Ray
    My only suggestion is to share this with unemployment/job service offices and resume writing companies.  The words that were taken out are the VERY same words that these companies endorse one to use.  I would also like to see an article on how to impress a potential employer via behavioral type questions.  These are extremely difficult for some and I am one of themThank youAngela Ray RN MSN
  • Joyce Gause
    Joyce Gause
    I have been looking for a long time. I I need advice
  • Tequella Davis
    Tequella Davis
    wonderful advice. i wil lbe using it
  • douglas Gray
    douglas Gray
    Great lists !  This is very helpful.  I read resumes all the time and you have correctly identified many of the words that shut me down.
  • Makumbi Kioko
    Makumbi Kioko
    Very helpful information but suggest a sample resume
  • Cassandra Belin
    Cassandra Belin
    Hye would you send me an example on what a good resume would be with out using the words talked about not to use.
  • Victoria Dixon
    Victoria Dixon
    This is interesting and useful. Thank you.
  • Parker Davis
    Parker Davis
    This is crap put together by someone who doesn't understand the hiring process or has even been involved in it.  As some posters here stated, make your resume clean, neat, understandable with no grammar or spelling problems first, them worry about what verbs or adjectives you use.  
  • Delrico Farris
    Delrico Farris
    Thanks for the great information
  • clint allan
    clint allan
    Great information.  Making the adjustments to my resume now.
  • RWIGEMA Gilbert
    RWIGEMA Gilbert
    Very helpful!! Thank you
  • Shannon
    Shannon
    Rebecca S - I disagree. Even in Human Services, you can "Improve Communications," "Reduce Waste," or "Create a New Process." Companies are looking for effective and innovative employees in every field. Most companies do not simply want to know the tasks you performed every day (which are also actions), but the actions you have taken to improve your workplace. Try to think creatively. If you find that you are simply going in to work and doing the same thing every day just to punch out at 5:00, try to think of something you CAN do to improve the situation.
  • Marcus Saunders
    Marcus Saunders
    This article offers excellent insight, game changing word play to advance applicants resume to the(second look pile). Dividing it from the as so qualified applicants. Thank you !
  • Shaikh S
    Shaikh S
    article very informative and helpful to create a resume for job seekers, It will be appropriate if a sample resume is also suggested for benefit of raw hands.
  • Norman R
    Norman R
    Thanks for helpful information.
  • Ash W
    Ash W
    Great article.    I will put this info to good use.
  • Valerie S
    Valerie S
    Thank you.Just saved this to my Resume folder!
  • oyewale m. o
    oyewale m. o
    Thanks for the info.
  • Tammy C
    Tammy C
    This article is too broad these words cannot always be used in context with certain fields of employment.  Sad that times have come to this.Whatever happened to the human element?
  • Judy P
    Judy P
    fascinating article - I have quite a few of the dump-them words on my resume and almost none of the use-them words - guess I'll be changing/updating my resume! Thank you for the help.
  • Cloyd L
    Cloyd L
    Very Informative

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