9 Words to Dump from Your Resume And the Hot 9 to Include

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Think of the hundreds of resumes that cross an HR manager’s desk every week. It’s truly a mountain of paperwork they’d rather bypass. With the job market being what it is, applicants and recent grads are cranking out resumes using the same accepted industry standard formats. Nothing wrong with that. But there are subtle ways to make your resume stand out from the rest.  

 
One way is to be word wise. That means dumping the standard weak-weasel words and “amping” your resume with power words. Words that will catch a recruiter’s or HR manager’s eye.  Words that will stop a keyword scanning program and shift your resume into the “take a second look” category. But first, the words that need dumping. They include:


  1. Strong
  2. Exceptional
  3. Good
  4. Excellent
  5. Outstanding
  6. Effective
  7. Driven
  8. Motivated
  9. Seasoned


These are self-aggrandizing words that your references may use to describe you. But if you use them, it sounds like you’re patting yourself on the back. They simply lack objectivity. They’re qualitative and can’t easily be linked to quantitative appraisals of your accomplishments.

 
It’s much better to use the hot 9 words that can be connected to specific areas of your performance on the job. These will catch a recruiter’s or HR manager’s eye. They’ll also be flagged by keyword programs, giving your resume a “second read.”  They include:


  1. Reduced
  2. Improved
  3. Developed
  4. Researched
  5. Created
  6. Increased
  7. Accomplished
  8. Won
  9. Under budget


When using these keywords, try to link them with specific facts and figures. This adds credibility to the words and will draw the attention of recruiters, HR managers and most recently, applicant tracking software. 

 
It’s an unfortunate fact of life that most companies now use some type of applicant tracking software. This software looks for keywords that match specific job requirements. Some companies digitize the hundreds of resumes they receive on a daily basis, store them in a database, search for candidates using keywords, then create interview call lists. The bottom line: If your resume lacks the right combination of job-specific keywords, it will end up in digital limbo, never to be seen again until a programmer purges the file. I know, it’s brutal and impersonal, but such is the world we live in. 

 
Here are some suggestions on the types of keywords to include in your resume. They should be job, task and industry specific:

  • Job Titles
  • Product Names
  • Technical Terms
  • Industry Jargon
  • Software/Hardware Packages
  • Job-specific Buzzwords
  • Degrees or Certifications
  • University or College Names
  • Company Names
  • Service Types
  • Professional Organizations


Creating an effective resume that will get noticed these days takes a bit of work. Much more than just listing your accomplishments. If you have any suggestions, be sure to include them in the comments section.


 

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  • sean H
    sean H
    I will give this a try for sure.a new way to look at it.
  • John Goodsell
    John Goodsell
    Makes sense. I was using some of the "Don't use words too. Time for a revamp of the resume'Thanks
  • Randall Lawhead
    Randall Lawhead
    true experince and ability shouldn't be our approach to the job marked or based solely on the verbage of our application don't you think?
  • Yomi E
    Yomi E
    logical hints
  • Mary  L
    Mary  L
    I found this article to be very helpful.  Some of the "Not to Use" words are what I had been using.
  • John L
    John L
    Thank you for providing up to date essential, Informative information that makes a difference in today's job searches. Truly empowering.SincerelyJohn
  • Laura N
    Laura N
    I find this horribly confusing.  The examples of words to ditch from your resume are the same words that the job descriptions contain as desired attributes.  Other advice columns swear that to get noticed through a scanning database, you have to reuse as many of the same words seen in the job description as possible.  (How many job descriptions contain the words, "Excellent communication skills?"  10's of thousands?).  Humans set up the parameters for the matching in these databases.  If the person setting it up, doesn't know a lot about the job, they will copy the description into the parameters to be searched.  --Honestly? if you try to incorporate everything you read on resume advice, you would never get anything on paper to send out!  - The words shown to be included are good, but I'm not sure the "ditch" words should be completely left out.  All things in moderation?  As in the rest of life?  Quantifying accomplishments is important but sse words that make your resume flow and tout your best attributes.  If you are never allowed to say you are "excellent or strong or outstanding" at anything, how does that reflect on your self-worth?
  • J. S
    J. S
    Thanks for sharing vital information.
  • A. L. P
    A. L. P
    Very valuable!  I definitely get it...
  • Thomas L
    Thomas L
    I am getting mixed signals here!  The university where I just received my Masters Degree says that I should stick with the Federal Rules for Resumes, and not use Technical terms, or Industry Jargon, as most HR people today probably would not know what that type of stuff is about.  My degree is in Criminal Justice Administration.Can you clarify this for me?Thouroughly Confused
  • andrew c
    andrew c
    Nice but how does one pass the on line assessments?
  • Deborah B
    Deborah B
    very good and helpful
  • Elizabeth B
    Elizabeth B
    Thank you
  • GERARD R
    GERARD R
    good recommendations!
  • Dan M
    Dan M
    It was very informative
  • Dan K
    Dan K
    I like the use of more money words. Ahead of scheduleMargins Increased cash flowReduced DSO
  • Greg b
    Greg b
    My complements on some practical hints for using language and words which just take up space, give no useful information to the reader, as well as forming negative impressions of an inept ability to communicate attributes and achievements in a meaningful way. What seems to work is to communicate what you have accomplished and achieved in terms of specific results in the past to create value and monetary benefit to the organization through your employment. We must answer the question if we were worth our pay in the past as a predictor that we will be in the future. If not, WHY should someone hire us?
  • Nancy W
    Nancy W
    So, how do you say that you've received passes, gift cards, awards because of your "Excellent" performance in customer service?  i.e. that you have gone Above and Beyond for providing "Superior" customer service?
  • Jerome Lindsay
    Jerome Lindsay
    You are on the ball with the information you are giving
  • Philip Knowles
    Philip Knowles
    I think the idea is good to be less selling with verbs but, the truth is always  the best policy.All the second set of words are completed some-thing action words not selling...Great idea. and positive.. Charge on....ThanksP
  • Brian Hill
    Brian Hill
    Good stuff here, i am looking over me resume now to make some changes. thank you
  • DIANE VALLEE
    DIANE VALLEE
    Great article!  Do you have ideas for keywords to include in healthcare, specifically, nursing?
  • Alan W
    Alan W
    If these words should be ditched why do ALL ads use them. Unless HR has stopped doing word searches it would seem a really bad idea.
  • Michele Fischer
    Michele Fischer
    This information will help me tremendously in my task to  modify and upgrade my resume!  Thank you.
  • Enrique Martinez
    Enrique Martinez
    Lets see how this works

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