9 Words to Dump from Your Resume And the Hot 9 to Include

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Think of the hundreds of resumes that cross an HR manager’s desk every week. It’s truly a mountain of paperwork they’d rather bypass. With the job market being what it is, applicants and recent grads are cranking out resumes using the same accepted industry standard formats. Nothing wrong with that. But there are subtle ways to make your resume stand out from the rest.  

 
One way is to be word wise. That means dumping the standard weak-weasel words and “amping” your resume with power words. Words that will catch a recruiter’s or HR manager’s eye.  Words that will stop a keyword scanning program and shift your resume into the “take a second look” category. But first, the words that need dumping. They include:


  1. Strong
  2. Exceptional
  3. Good
  4. Excellent
  5. Outstanding
  6. Effective
  7. Driven
  8. Motivated
  9. Seasoned


These are self-aggrandizing words that your references may use to describe you. But if you use them, it sounds like you’re patting yourself on the back. They simply lack objectivity. They’re qualitative and can’t easily be linked to quantitative appraisals of your accomplishments.

 
It’s much better to use the hot 9 words that can be connected to specific areas of your performance on the job. These will catch a recruiter’s or HR manager’s eye. They’ll also be flagged by keyword programs, giving your resume a “second read.”  They include:


  1. Reduced
  2. Improved
  3. Developed
  4. Researched
  5. Created
  6. Increased
  7. Accomplished
  8. Won
  9. Under budget


When using these keywords, try to link them with specific facts and figures. This adds credibility to the words and will draw the attention of recruiters, HR managers and most recently, applicant tracking software. 

 
It’s an unfortunate fact of life that most companies now use some type of applicant tracking software. This software looks for keywords that match specific job requirements. Some companies digitize the hundreds of resumes they receive on a daily basis, store them in a database, search for candidates using keywords, then create interview call lists. The bottom line: If your resume lacks the right combination of job-specific keywords, it will end up in digital limbo, never to be seen again until a programmer purges the file. I know, it’s brutal and impersonal, but such is the world we live in. 

 
Here are some suggestions on the types of keywords to include in your resume. They should be job, task and industry specific:

  • Job Titles
  • Product Names
  • Technical Terms
  • Industry Jargon
  • Software/Hardware Packages
  • Job-specific Buzzwords
  • Degrees or Certifications
  • University or College Names
  • Company Names
  • Service Types
  • Professional Organizations


Creating an effective resume that will get noticed these days takes a bit of work. Much more than just listing your accomplishments. If you have any suggestions, be sure to include them in the comments section.


 

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  • Wanda J
    Wanda J
    I think this is true about the wording of the resume. I will be using your advice often in order to find the career choice that I have chosen.
  • George P
    George P
    I will use this in my Improved resume.
  • Tom T
    Tom T
    I disagree with your advice not to use the top list.  I agree with your bottom list.  But you are mixing apples and oranges here!  The bottom list are action verbs that should be used to describe accomplishments in a resume, but the top list should also be used to describe skills.  After all, it seems that most resume "experts" tell us to "toot our own horn" ... in short, i agree with Laura's message.  I will continue to use Strong, Excellent, Outstanding, etc., as adjectives to precede skills statements in my skills summary at the top of my resume.  I've been doing so for years, and I've been landing interviews and jobs as a result!I think you are giving bad advice!
  • Patricia T
    Patricia T
    An excellent article with very good advice and explanation of what agencies do with the thousands of resumes and how they are filed.  Somewhere in a dark black hole in Cyberspace-more pollution.Really, it was an excellent and well thought out article.  
  • DOMINADOR O
    DOMINADOR O
    very informative
  • Walter V
    Walter V
    Sounds like helpful advice. Would find it amazing if I actually got through to HR.
  • Luis H
    Luis H
    Thank you, this is worth passing on to others. This increased my certainty on something that I already had an awareness of.
  • David M
    David M
    The timing of this article couldn't be better.  I'll get my resume revised by the end of the day.  
  • Deborah K
    Deborah K
    I like this article and I am now creating a better resume after reading this.
  • Anthony M
    Anthony M
    At the rate the work industry is growing you need every tool,And this a great tool. Thank You.
  • Katherine B
    Katherine B
    Thank you for the insight!  KB
  • Gerardo Azanedo
    Gerardo Azanedo
    This article has been objetive and realistic. It show us how the recruiters  see and think about us, and not how we wish they see us. The mistakes are ours, the seekers.
  •  Theresa J
    Theresa J
    I am very grateful for these tips. I always wondered which word is the best word that I could used to enhance my resume. Thank you.
  • Dr. B
    Dr. B
    Information is quite useful!
  • Kristen C
    Kristen C
    Well put. Utilizing marketing techniques - quantitative in the language, opposed to subjective positioning statements. What you've done speaks for what you are capable of.
  • Stephen R
    Stephen R
    What exactly is the software used for tracking applicant details I wonder???
  • Bichitra N
    Bichitra N
    I am sorry I dont agree fully. There is nothing wrong to rely on your strengths and prepared to improve your weaknesses.  Be job prepared. Match your skill sets with the job requirements.
  • Tim S
    Tim S
    I find job searching very discouraging just from the angle of you worked hard and came up with an exceptional  rendition of yourself and applied it well to a position, built in a format to allow changing a few key words to make it somewhat universal. Only to find out HR depts. are using Worddle after a program has weeded out a very high percentage. Leaving one to wonder if you should've spent that $125 to have a gifted online résumé writer fill in all your blanks for you, like that totally under qualified  "smarter" individual who ended up landing the job.Thanks for listening, I will do my best  with this great list of suggestions .
  • Michael M
    Michael M
    Good advice. Have revised my resume today! Thank you.
  • Frank Dye
    Frank Dye
    Short and sweet- nice!
  • Richard Lareva
    Richard Lareva
    As a 37 year professional, I firmly agree with all these tips. I have used most of them for years, just out of common sense, but there were a few mistakes I have been making which will be imediately corrected. As a sideline, one tip you might want to give your audience is do not depend on spellcheck to catch every mistake you make. I often catch my own mistakes that spell check did not. Some people actually think this doesn't matter, but I've done some hiring my self, and I assure you it does.
  • Yves Pierre-Louis
    Yves Pierre-Louis
    Very informative and helpful
  • Shanida H
    Shanida H
    I have tweeked my resume with those key words used above.Thank You,That was very informational.
  • Cynthia Cauthern
    Cynthia Cauthern
    Excellent article.  Your suggestions are extremely helpful.Regards,Cynthia
  • Beth R
    Beth R
    What is most important is editing. It does not matter which words you choose if they are spelled wrong or used incorrectly.  Spelling and grammatical errors may be common oversights but these mistakes can be construed as a lack of attention to detail, laziness, or carelessness.  We all make these mistakes (your instead of you're) but these are what can deter a company from considering you as a possible candidate. Also, using adjectives like "excellent" or "effective" may have beneficial value in showing confidence or as someone pointed out, self worth. You can have strong or weak communication skills, but it is better to use specific examples as to how and/or what style(s) of communication (interpersonal, mass, and verbal vs. non verbal) make you a strong or effective communicator.  As long as you can back your descriptive words with specific examples then using these adjectives should not harm you.  

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